I found my comments to be helpful and ensightful. There were some encouraging comments as well as some that point out my weaknesses so I am able to improve one those. I had the most difficulty with composing topic sentences. They werent specific enough, so that resulted in my body paragraphs straying off topic a little bit. In past essays I also had trouble making my essay in MLA format, but thats just something you have to memorize and I'm pretty sure I've got it down. Another comment provided me with a tip on chooseing my words more wisely, as to make my argument stronger. Simply, avoid sounding passive.
My strengths I think were the ideas I had were very strong and realated to the topic. asdfjkl;ufyv
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